Introductory Essay
Outline for an Introductory Essay
I. Introduction
II. Personal Information
a) Meaning of my name
b) Occupation
c) Personality
d) Hobbies
e) Likes and Dislikes
III. Positive Life Experiences
a) Meeting my boyfriend
b) Studying in the University
IV. Personal Goals
a) Short-term goal: To get a job
b) Long-term goal: To form a happy family
b) Long-term goal: To form a happy family
V. Conclusion
Introductory Essay
The basis of a good relationship is when people know you and vice versa, but first of all you need to talk about yourself. In this way you can connect with others and as a result make a good friendship, working environment, even a romantic relationship. The purpose of this essay is to introduce myself to others in order to share my personal information, positive life experiences, and personal goals.
Something important is my personal information. My name is Karen and it comes from a Danish origin and it means pure. I do not have a job but I would like to start working before I finish my major, I am a responsible and tolerant person who likes to tell jokes. Some of my hobbies are: sleeping in the afternoon, listening to any kind of music, swimming, and chatting. I like cats and fish, white chocolates, meeting new people, white roses, and sunny days, among other things. On the other hand, I do not like: dancing reggaeton, big dogs, and liars, among other things.
I have had many positive experiences but in this case I will write about two of them. My experience with internet has good and bad things. A good thing I got from it was to meet to my boyfriend through a web page whose name is metroflog. He has taught me a lot of good things and I am so happy for being with him. Another positive experience is to study at UAA. I have acquired a lot of knowledge and learned many things from my new beautiful friends.
In addition, each person has short-term and long-term goals. My short-term goal is to get a job. I would like to work on a Primary School or High School with adults. My long-term goal is to form a happy family. I would like to have a son and a daughter, a big and beautiful house and travel around the world with them.
As a conclusion, it is important not to judge people only for their physical appearance. You need to take time for knowing others. I can say I am a social person. I have improved my personality due to my life experiences (with internet and studying at the UAA). I expect to achieve my goals: to get a job and to form a happy family.
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First Peer Revision: Jackeline Rico Martinez
Can you identify the main idea or thesis in this essay? The basis of a good relationship is when people know you and viceversa but first of all you need to talk about yourself
Does this essay have an introduction? Yes
Does the introduction give an outline of what the author is going to talk about? Yes
Is the writing clear and understandable? Yes
Does the essay have a clearly organized middle section, with ideas separated into paragraphs? Yes
Does each paragraph begin with a topic sentence? Yes
Does the essay have a concluding paragraph? Yes
Does the conclusion restate the main points of the essay in a new way and give a sense of completion to the essay? Yes
The ideas of the essay were observable, the thesis was: the basis of a good relationship is when people know you and viceversa but first of all you need to talk about yourself. It contains author's topic. It has an appropiate introducction because mention all the points that are going to be mentioned, is clear and understandable. each idea is presented in different paragraphs well-organized.
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